Looking for pointers.

[Uinike 0]

Hey as the title says just want someone to critique me and point out areas I can improve at. I'm relatively new to reading logs so I don't quite know where to dig up all the info or what I'm looking at sometimes. 

https://www.warcraftlogs.com/reports/BXna3hQyjMJzpwqG#fight=9&type=damage-done&source=22

 

[Vacivity 0]

Is this your armory?

https://worldofwarcraft.com/en-us/character/proudmoore/linens

If so, why are you using kil'jaedens ? 

[Uinike 0]

This log is like a week old. I got the bracers on reset. I'm not looking for gear pointers though just issues I may be having priority wise.

[Vacivity 0]

Okay let's go through this log as if it were your optimal setup then.

First off the fight is 3 min 15 seconds long, you should be able to fit 2 sindragosa's fury and 3 kil'jaedens inside this window, you only fitted 1 and 2. And you cast your sindragosa without having pillar of frost on - huge loss. At the same time you only used 1 prepot, you should always fit a second one in if you are looking for optimal dps. 

Now to breath duration and HRW management. Your first breath is a tad bit short, seems like you could try to push off the HRWs for as long  as possible. Your second breath wasn't alligned with a HRW, which is a huge dps loss. If the fight allows it, use convergence to fit another HRW in with your second breath. 

You have rimes being unspent for 5+ seconds a few times, which should always take priority, unless you are severely RP starved during breath, which certainly wasn't the case at 1:39. Secondly you didn't cast a remorless at around 1:45 for some reason despite it being avaible, and to add to this point you might wanna try saving a few runes for your remorless so you don't cast it empty handed and can't build it up. 

Your crit % on your abilities seems quite high, you might want to swap some of it into mastery as to allow for breath and HB to do more of your dmg (this will depend on whether you have HB/frost dmg relics).