[Ret] Log analysis - How can I improve?

[Declarion 0]

Hey guys, a guildie told me to make a thread here since I am the only Retadin in our 25 man and was hoping somebody could analyze a fight or two and give me some contructive feedback.

due to the armory being down, I'll just drop a screenshot of my unbuffed stats pane down

I am using Heroic Eye (4/4) and WF Thok's tail (0/4) and currently have the T16 2 set bonus

Guild told me that Iron Juggs was one of the best fights to use when showing logs, this log is from before I had my 2 piece and tail tip though
http://www.warcraftlogs.com/reports/bcvjT2VRmHK3dGX4#fight=17&type=damage-done&source=23

I am currently using the same rotation in the guide here on the site except that I use Judgement before Crusader Strike.

Thanks for the help in advance, I really appreciate it!

Edited August 30, 2014 by Declarion

[Oreoxd 165]

One of the big things I notice is you're not lining up your Str Procs, with your ES casts. If you were an Engi, I'd suggest a macro for ES and a normal ES button; however, since you aren't you should like ES up with every Dancing Proc you can. 

 

Also try your hardest to keep Inq up 100% of the time. It is your most important buff.

 

I'd also like to know your gems, as those are a big deal.

[Declarion 0]

Thank you for the reply!
Gems are as follows
Capacitive Primal Diamond and Fierce Verm Onyx in helm
Lightning Wild Jade x 2 in shoulders
Precise prim ruby x2 and 1 quick sun's rad in chest
1 fierce verm and 1 precise prim ruby in gloves
2 fierce verm onyx in legs
1 precise prim ruby in boots
1 fierce verm onyx in Ring2
1 quick sun's rad in weapon

I've been using the standard haste ret build. Should I create a weakaura with triggers set for trinket procs?

Edited August 30, 2014 by Declarion

[LobbyBoy 37]

I have taken a look at your armory profile: (i hope this is realy yours  )

http://us.battle.net/wow/en/character/earthen-ring/Declarion/advanced

 

You are using TI trinket instead of Thoks which is not the first choice.

Geming is not optimal. You should try to reach haste cap, i.e. 40% so you should drop some Bold Primordial Ruby and prefer Fierce Vermilion Onyx and Quick Sun's Radiance instead.

 

 

[Oreoxd 165]

Lobby, armories are broken at the moment. So it's not accurate.

[LobbyBoy 37]

Uhh, didn't know that ...

I was amazed at the screenshot 

[Declarion 0]

Uhh, didn't know that ...

I was amazed at the screenshot 

Haha, yeah, my RL had me switch to ret and I was the only strength dps rolling on gear in our 25 man, gear is getting upgraded very quickly, for the past week the priority has been filling my slots rather than optimizing them and pretty much from here on out I'll just be rolling on the haste pieces I need to hit the higher haste tiers. I also have logs for Blackfuse which represent the gear I am currently wearing. Guild Mistress didn't take logs for Blackfuse, I was doing about 210k on that fight, I really would have liked to see my uptimes.

Edited August 30, 2014 by Declarion